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Poem for mango's (written & translated by me)
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Poem for mango's (written & translated by me)
PokeLinkEB Wed Feb 02, 2011 10:53 pm
Ode to Mango -
The smooth mango
outside, carefree
inside, still not knowing.
Like him there is no other
his red of fire,
completely green, well almost,
great yellow it dawns.
His blood blinds the sun,
with an enormous & deep heart,
it sings to the tree...
But to immense pain he succumbs,
eaten, left with no flesh.
Only the bleeding heart remains,
his body taken away.
The smooth mango
outside, carefree
inside, still not knowing.
Like him there is no other
his red of fire,
completely green, well almost,
great yellow it dawns.
His blood blinds the sun,
with an enormous & deep heart,
it sings to the tree...
But to immense pain he succumbs,
eaten, left with no flesh.
Only the bleeding heart remains,
his body taken away.
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Re: Poem for mango's (written & translated by me)
PokeLinkEB Wed Feb 02, 2011 10:55 pm
I'll put the original up later to try & get a better translation from anyone who offers or just myself.
Either way i'll probably edit the translation a few times.
Either way i'll probably edit the translation a few times.
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Re: Poem for mango's (written & translated by me)
Kroniedon Thu Feb 03, 2011 2:21 am
Post it in story corner 
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Re: Poem for mango's (written & translated by me)
PokeLinkEB Thu Feb 03, 2011 2:23 am
I felt like it but its not really a story...but if you insist ill move it there...eventually...slowly but surely...when the time is right...when you least suspect it...NOW! Nah later maybe.
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Re: Poem for mango's (written & translated by me)
PokeLinkEB Mon Apr 11, 2011 11:45 pm
Looks like i can move it now... guess i'll do that.
Heres the original, btw charol meaning piel or skin
El mango suave
por fuera y flojo
por dentro, aun no sabe.
Como el no hay otro
su rojo de lumbre,
todo verde, casi todo,
gran amarillo brinde.
Su sangre ciega al sol,
corazon grande y ondo,
le canta al arbol . . .
pero el dolor profundo
mordido sin charol.
Corazon sangriento quedo,
su cuerpo no alcanso.
Heres the original, btw charol meaning piel or skin
El mango suave
por fuera y flojo
por dentro, aun no sabe.
Como el no hay otro
su rojo de lumbre,
todo verde, casi todo,
gran amarillo brinde.
Su sangre ciega al sol,
corazon grande y ondo,
le canta al arbol . . .
pero el dolor profundo
mordido sin charol.
Corazon sangriento quedo,
su cuerpo no alcanso.
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Re: Poem for mango's (written & translated by me)
PokeLinkEB Sun May 08, 2011 1:34 am
You should see the mountain of papers i had to dig through to find it!
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Re: Poem for mango's (written & translated by me)
Kroniedon Thu Jun 23, 2011 12:25 pm
Lol.... are you aware that if you do a google search for "Mango Poem" this page is on the first page od search results xD
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